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Critique by lumination lumination/critique/1352860664">Mar 18, 2016, 8:30:39 AM
The composition of this piece is outstanding! A citadel of dreams is woven as we lose ourselves within the poetic writings and emerge as newborn into a world that has ever so slightly shifted. A masterpiece in the genre, absolutely recommended!

The composition seems simple at first, but when given thought, it is clear that the author has a much deeper vision than what appears to the naked eye. Getting lost in complexities as they surface ever so gently from the subtle hints thrown to the reader. I enjoyed the 'n' stuff section enormously and I won't spoil the next part of the text, but any reader taking his or her time, is in for a pleasant surprise.
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zilla774 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Professional Interface Designer
ha! best response to a test ever. Have a Core Membership on me :)
lumination Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016
Haha! Thanks! That's really nice of you! I've never had one before. :)
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